I
started writing this story with no direction.
Not something a writer should really do.
But this is an experiment and an outlet – writing for the sake of
writing. This is not a finished piece. In fact, this is only the very beginning. But I have already fallen in love with the characters. I feel like this will be a much longer story than I am prepared to write at this particular moment. Let’s see where it goes.
Haruki stood near the foot of the
hill, far enough back to see his destination – the wisps of clouds curling from
an unseen clearing about halfway up the forested slope – but close enough to
see the wall of trees marking the start of the gentle mountains.
The hard lump of emotion swelling
in this throat drew him toward the tree line.
He had always imagined it was a dragon, its emerald body curled in the
secret clearing, smoke rising with each sleeping breath. Just like the local name for the hills
themselves. No, Niichan had always
argued, it was group of monks, their bald heads bowed, their moss robes splayed
around their seated forms as they chanted in deep, comforting hums. They were sitting in a tight circle, a fire
of fragrant wood smoldering in their center. They were the guardians of the
mountain, the ones who kept the dragons asleep.
Growing up they had argued
constantly over the strange and wonderful weather patterns that played out in
the mountains rising just behind their home.
Niichan, two years older, with glasses that refused to stay on his nose
and needed constant adjustment. Calm,
bookish, and pale like their mother.
Haruki, his knees and elbows perpetually scabbed, constantly in motion,
with the crooked, roguish smile of their father. Two brothers – inseparable, but who couldn’t
be more different. How many times had
they taken off into the woods, scrambling up the mountain side, searching for
the source of the clouds, each determined to prove his version correct, only to
be thwarted by the mountain, or the sun, or Kachan calling them home for
dinner.
He started his assent, passing
between two ancient trees, a living shrine gate. His twenty three year old legs ate up the
distance quicker than he remembered. He
was also out of breath quicker than he remembered. He wove his way around trees and crashed through
the undergrowth. His destination was
obscured, but the direction was fixed in his mind. Just up a little further. What will be waiting at the foot of those
strange clouds, rising like smoke from the dark green slopes?
*
Jack dropped the last bag in the
middle of the now cluttered living room.
With a heavy sigh, he flopped down onto the narrow space on the couch
left between boxes and suitcases. How
could someone acquire so much crap? He
hadn’t realized how much there was until he started packing. One suitcase turned to two. Two to three.
A trip to the grocery store for some of their empty boxes. Two years crammed into Kraft and Coca
Cola. Another sigh as he looked around
the new apartment.
He couldn’t see it as her
apartment. Not yet. The white walls, nondescript furniture that
was about a decade out of style – it was the
apartment for now.
Utilitarian – that’s the word his
father would use. He liked big
words. He thought they hid the fact he
had barely made it out of high school.
He had used decidedly smaller words, most with only four or six letters,
when Jack told him about Kate.
A lifetime ago. But the pain still fresh. He had needed a new start. Had found it in a new apartment, a new job,
and a new town.
He looked at the stacks of boxes –
half the pieces of the puzzle that had been his life. They wouldn’t unpack themselves. But not tonight.
He pushed himself up from the
couch. Not tonight. He scooped up his wallet from where he had
dropped it by the door. The keys to the
apartment, still not attached to his key ring, fell to the floor. With a sigh, he bent down.
He had passed a small restaurant
on the drive over. A hole in the wall. But it looked respectable enough. No need to drive, it was only a handful of
blocks, so he could have a few more drinks than a guy spending his first night
in a new town should.
The mountains looked black in the
fading light. More hills than mountains,
really. A thirty minute hike would get
you to the top. If you could find a way
through the thick vegetation. They
surrounded the town on three sides, seeming to melt slowly into the back of the
houses in the quite neighborhoods on the fringes of the city – neighborhoods
like this one.
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